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The Dark Killing. Murder, Revenge, and Evil.

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The Dark Killing. Murder, Revenge, and Evil.

Post by Guest on Fri Jun 20, 2014 10:53 pm

One day, I was.. defeated. By a mortal. He wanted power.


Chapter 1: The War Is Now.


One day, I was flying high through the clouds, when suddenly, I heard shrieks. The king's army.. they were ready to bring it down. The land. Where I grew up. Where I was born. And as I went down to fight, I brought my wings. With me. I was ready to fight. He shall never, ever, get this land. However, they had warriors. So I brought mine. They were large. Brave. Courageous. The battle, had just begun. They considered me just a little pixie, however I.. was no pixie. I was.. the guardian. I, was the fighter. And who were they? Some silly mortals? As the horses and knives went, I'd decided.. to let the warriors of mine help me, first. Half the men, injured and near death. I then went straight for the king. He was a large man, so he'd be easy. I took his own sword, and fought him. He had no one. His men, all dying, injured, or galloping back. He, was going to die. We had won.
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Chapter 2: The One That Got Away.
After that.. I hadn't noticed one man gotten away. After the battle was done, I went back to flying.. through the clouds. I noticed him, and he was going straight for the center. Where the fairies fly. If he took it down, we were all going to die.. and he.. would become king. As I went down to attack, he said 'HALT. I am no one looking to take down the moors. I am just a peasant. My parents are dead.' I asked, "What on Earth made you, a mortal, come into the moors?" His reply was, "I wanted to live here. Where royalty isn't an issue.'' So, I let him in. And that, was a big mistake. For that, was the killing. 
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Chapter 3: The Wings
We chatted. His name was Daniel. He was my age. His parents.. were dead. But sadly, I did not know that power was so important to him. As time went on, strangers turn into friends, friends turn into best friends.. and best friends.. sometimes.. become lovers. On my 16th birthday, he gave me the gift I will never forget. True love. I never saw him again after that. Sometimes I wondered where he was. What happened to him. But the king.. wanted to take 'the large winged pixie' down. Whoever took me down, was king. He came to use me. For king. I was so blinded by love that I hadn't noticed what was happening. And when I was tired.. I hadn't noticed he'd run off. With something.. I'd loved. My wings. Gone. Forever. I cried for hours on end. And when I was done.. I'd become evil. Mad. There was no going back.
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Chapter 4: First of the Line. 
I couldn't walk without my wings. I picked up a stick. It turned into a cane. Magic. Black steam. I was walking through the moors when I saw a bird, being attacked. I turned it into a man. He said 'What have you done to me?' In reply 'You were being attacked. I saved your life.' He had become my servant. I asked him to spy on the king.. and I found out. The king was having a child. After he was the first in his line. So during the ceremony.. I'd come in. 'Have you forgotten an invitation?' In reply.. he said 'You are not welcome here'. So I'd decided to give a gift of my own to the child. "The child shall be loved.. however.. when the sun went down on her sixteenth birthday.. she shall This forum has blocked this word. -Admin. her finger on the glass of the broken mirror, and die. The curse was so powerful that only true love could break it.. and true love did not exist. Or so I thought. 


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Post by Ani on Fri Jun 20, 2014 11:39 pm

so r u making a story like maleficent ?

and we wont hate u
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Re: The Dark Killing. Murder, Revenge, and Evil.

Post by bella on Sat Jun 21, 2014 3:52 am

I love this *~* DO MORRREEEEEEE
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Re: The Dark Killing. Murder, Revenge, and Evil.

Post by Guest on Sat Jun 21, 2014 8:02 am

Its nice c:

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Post by King K on Sat Jun 21, 2014 9:17 am

Amg this really good Harry ^-^
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Re: The Dark Killing. Murder, Revenge, and Evil.

Post by Sadie♡ on Sat Jun 21, 2014 10:32 am

Ohh this is really good!! More please!!<33
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Re: The Dark Killing. Murder, Revenge, and Evil.

Post by Guest on Sat Jun 21, 2014 11:58 am

Chapter 2, posted!c:

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Post by Guest on Sat Jun 21, 2014 12:00 pm

Next chapter. .? :]

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Post by Guest on Sat Jun 21, 2014 12:01 pm

BooBear. wrote:Next chapter. .? :]
I decided to lay it out as one post, so check back!c:

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Post by Guest on Sat Jun 21, 2014 12:03 pm

Yupp I know but next chapter [ch 3] :]

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Post by Guest on Sat Jun 21, 2014 12:04 pm

BooBear. wrote:Yupp I know but next chapter [ch 3] :]
In a few hours maybe yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 
cliffhanger ;D

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Post by Guest on Sat Jun 21, 2014 10:29 pm

Nice cc:

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Post by Moose on Sat Jun 21, 2014 10:37 pm

moreeee please >:
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Re: The Dark Killing. Murder, Revenge, and Evil.

Post by Hazza on Sat Jun 21, 2014 11:06 pm

Awesome, more please!

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Re: The Dark Killing. Murder, Revenge, and Evil.

Post by Admin on Sun Jun 22, 2014 8:43 am

Yikkesss, great story-writing! Very Happy Your ending for chapter 2 was just superb, seriously! I can't wait for more! <3

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Post by Guest on Tue Jul 01, 2014 11:39 pm

my little haroldthot is amazing at writing ;D

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Post by Hazza on Tue Jul 01, 2014 11:51 pm

Omg the next two chapters are amazing! More please.

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Re: The Dark Killing. Murder, Revenge, and Evil.

Post by King K on Sat Jul 05, 2014 10:25 am

more!
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Re: The Dark Killing. Murder, Revenge, and Evil.

Post by Guest on Sun Jul 06, 2014 7:04 am

Very nice writing!! :]

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Post by Guest on Sun Jul 06, 2014 9:49 am

ty i try i love my fan base im so sorry i havent been updating ur all so cool here is pizza

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Post by Admin on Mon Jul 07, 2014 4:00 am

i'm your no.1 fan  WOAH THERE, I'M TOO

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