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~ "Escaping the Abuser" ~

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~ "Escaping the Abuser" ~

Post by ✈FlyAway✈ on Sun Jul 06, 2014 2:23 am

This is my narrative poem for my English class c: Hope you like it!!
{A narrative poem is just like a normal poem but it tells a story} Please do not use my poem for any use without asking my permission first and giving me credit. This poem took me a week to perfect and revise because it was for a grade that I worked hard for. Thank you (:







Escaping the Abuser

I stand still

Waiting- waiting

Like a statue in the frozen air

Nothing but bright diamonds

That swarm freely above me.

Oh, how I wish I were free.

The clock ticked

Tick, tick, tock, tock

Dad was supposed to come.

As time passed

No truck pulled up past,

So, I waited, waited

Maybe his words were misstated.

 

As the sun rose

I unpacked my clothes.

When Mother walked in

She observed my bruised and beaten skin.

Oh, how I wish I were free.

Without emotion

Without expression

Mother and daughter

Locked eyes

Before simultaneously remembering last night…

 

“Stop crying over your father.

There’s no reason to even bother.”

Cold, wet tears flowed down

Falling to my frown

“Your father, he beat me.”

Knees falling weak

Allowing fake tears to leak

“I- I need him.” I lied

 

I stand still

Waiting- waiting

Like a statue in the frozen air

As time passed

No truck pulled up past,

So, I waited, waited

Maybe his words were misstated.

 

Snapped out of thought

From a cracked voice

My mother stated,

“I know what he did to you.”

Shock took control of my face

My father

Abuser, heartless

He made me black and blue

Hitting me more than a few

“Don’t you tell a soul,

And tell your mother

You want to live with me,

Or get a bruising to your legs and your knees.”

Oh, how I wish I were free.

 

 

He must be put in jail

Before he makes us lifeless and frail.

“911 what is your emergency?”

“Child Abuse,” I say with urgency.

Sirens fill the silent air

Red, blue lights flashed on the way there

Father struggled the police

Refusing to give my family peace.

When he was taken to trial

I tried to hide my smile

For today I am finally free.

 

With father in a cell

Together, we said farewell.

My last words to my father were:

I hope you rot in your cell.

Now I am finally free.
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Re: ~ "Escaping the Abuser" ~

Post by Hazza on Sun Jul 06, 2014 12:54 pm

Wow this is awesome!

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Re: ~ "Escaping the Abuser" ~

Post by Admin on Sun Jul 06, 2014 1:08 pm

Wow, this is a very dark poem but it's amazingly written! Thank you for sharing (:

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Post by Catty♡ on Sun Jul 06, 2014 2:18 pm

woe GAHHH;DDD that is amazing
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Re: ~ "Escaping the Abuser" ~

Post by Hazza on Mon Aug 18, 2014 5:02 pm

Locked; old.

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