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Post by Catty♡ on Fri Jul 11, 2014 10:21 am

read on  Cool 

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The Silence
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Watching the clock with tears streaming down my face
A sense of dread fills my soul
I can feel death in my bones
The red door in the wall slowly opens,
I turn to face what might be the cause of my demise
I quickly wipe away my tears
Showing weakness will only be suicide
I take a deep ragged breath
Leaning heavily on the whitewashed walls,
I slowly pull myself off the musty floor
I try to take a stance of confidence
And advance with slow determined steps
My cold clammy hand wraps around the brazen doorknob
I slowly push open the door, trying to prepare myself for whatever
Is concealed by the blood red door
I stand in the door frame trying to hide my terrified trembles
I slowly open my eyes, casting my fear to the wind
If someone had told me that I would have seen That
I never would of believed them
A blood chilling scream gathers in my throat
When I open my mouth, no sound comes out
Only the morbid silence rings clear
And fills the room 
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Post by Cammy on Fri Jul 11, 2014 10:32 am

ITS AMAZING. I honestly was hanging on each word xD You did a fantastic job. c:<3


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Post by Moose on Fri Jul 11, 2014 10:34 am

beautifully written, I don't have a critique c:
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Post by Hazza on Fri Jul 11, 2014 12:57 pm

Wow that was amazing!

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Post by Hazza on Mon Sep 01, 2014 3:13 pm

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