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Life.-A story by Nadles

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Life.-A story by Nadles

Post by Guest on Wed Aug 27, 2014 10:08 am

Life.
Editing with story,wait a few hours please!

Introduction; 
Martha, a 10 year old girl was found dead on 1993, December 8. This comes shocking and hard on Annabelle as she loved spending time with  her older sister.  Recently Annabelle's mother is very worried about her daughter as she keeps on telling her about these dreams where  Martha shows up. 

Chapter 1; Martha's death
It was cold and windy that Winters night. All the kids were sent to bed early that night except some of them didn't really sleep at all. 
"Anne, Anne, Annabelle; wake up!" exclaimed Martha. Anne was fast asleep and couldn't hear a thing so Martha decided to push her off her bed so she'd wake up.
"Huh? What was that for?" said Annebelle in a sleep voice. She rubbed one eyes and she rubbed the other to make her vision not as blurry as it was. She then stared with squinch eyes, as if it was too brught at Martha.
"C'mon; we're going to explore the house!" 
"Why don't you ask James,  or Martin;  I'm too tired and they're up!"
"Well it wouldn't be fun with them. They'll only moan about how much we have to walk"
"I wouldn't blame them. This house is atleast a 10 kilometre walk. "
"Oh stop being all fussy;  it'll take only 10 minutes!"
She hesitated, unsure of what to say. 
"Alright,  but if we get caught in any trouble we're running back to the room. " said Annebelle, slowly as if she was trying ti say tjat they'll get caught soon. 
"Flashlight:check! Gown:check! Slippers:Check!"
"Don't be so edgy! We've got everything we need," said Martha.  Annebelle could tell that Martha was getting very annoyed at her "Let be on our way," she continued
Chapter 1; hasn't been finished!  
Update! I've changed the story since I  thought this one was more interesting c;. If you want me to continue the other one, please put that below in a comment
Thanks 


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Re: Life.-A story by Nadles

Post by ETRD on Wed Aug 27, 2014 10:32 am

Really good except I am puzzled for a title. The kings offer or the kings benefits or the kings money or the kingly benefit
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Post by Ani on Wed Aug 27, 2014 10:42 am

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Post by ETRD on Wed Aug 27, 2014 10:45 am

Kings with benefits!
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Post by Moose on Wed Aug 27, 2014 11:30 am

nice so far c:
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Post by Hazza on Wed Aug 27, 2014 12:57 pm

It's good so far!

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Post by Guest on Fri Aug 29, 2014 3:57 am

Updated! 

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Re: Life.-A story by Nadles

Post by Hazza on Fri Aug 29, 2014 11:13 am

Oh I like the edited version as well!

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Post by Hazza on Fri Sep 12, 2014 4:17 pm

Locked.

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