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Eve by Ireland

Post by Ireland on Fri Jul 26, 2013 12:16 pm

This is my new story:)

Chapter 1

Hi! My name is Ella. I am at school doing a boring test. I am in 4th Grade. My best friend, Eve is having the time of her life reading a book because she is done with her test. I am stuck on a question. My weakness is math. I finally get done with the test and it is time for lunch. I sit by Eve and eat my lunch quick. Now it is time for recess. I sit on the bench with Eve until it is time for another test. After the test I go home and do some boring homework. I eat dinner and go to bed. In thirty minutes I fall into a deep sleep.


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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Admin on Fri Jul 26, 2013 4:44 pm

Awesomee,more pweaseec:
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Maddie on Fri Jul 26, 2013 4:50 pm

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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Ireland on Fri Jul 26, 2013 5:09 pm

Chapter 2
The following morning I wake up late at 8:30. I hurry and get dressed, brush my hair, eat breakfast, brush my teeth and get my backpack. I start running to school but then I realize biking is faster so I get my bike. I am about halfway when I see Eve. She says, I have been waiting for you Ella. I reply, woke up late. Hop on, you'll get there faster. I smile
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Trini♥ on Fri Jul 26, 2013 5:10 pm

I really like this! more!
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Ireland on Fri Jul 26, 2013 5:13 pm

^ Thanks
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Maddie on Fri Jul 26, 2013 5:15 pm

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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Ireland on Fri Jul 26, 2013 5:34 pm

Chapter 3
When me and Eve finally get to school, My teacher Ms. Ellis is teaching math. She takes our tardy slips and continues teaching. After Math we each read for a little bit and go to lunch. We eat sandwiches ( My favorite ) and beans. Then we go to recess. Eve is very talented. She does five backwalkovers and ten cartwheels in ten seconds. She is also really pretty. I only have freckles and red hair. I hear the whistle and recess is over.
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Maddie on Fri Jul 26, 2013 5:49 pm

more!!
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Trini♥ on Fri Jul 26, 2013 9:59 pm

keep adding more (hint) I would just keep making a new post and make the chapters longer.. c:
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by kooky✖kristy on Sat Jul 27, 2013 1:05 am

more please, great story so far ; )
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Denise on Sat Jul 27, 2013 1:12 am

Great work!

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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Ireland on Sat Jul 27, 2013 10:05 am

Chapter 4

 When we get back inside Eve passes me a note. It said, I am moving in six months. I was shocked. I wrote, no no no no no don't move. Who am I gonna walk to school with? I passed the note. She wrote back and passed it to me. It said, your bike, LOL. I put the note in my desk and held in my sadness. Then we started math. I work on another boring test and when I get done I pass the note back to Eve.
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Maddie on Sat Jul 27, 2013 3:23 pm

MOREEE!
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by kooky✖kristy on Sat Jul 27, 2013 3:26 pm

More c: 
tips; try to write more in every entry, or write the chapters faster since they're pretty short.
nice story ~  
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Post by Ireland on Sun Jul 28, 2013 10:27 am

Chapter 5
Today is Friday so I invite Eve over for the night. We talk about her moving. I ask her, where are you moving to? She says, Vietnam. I gasp. But that's to far! I say. Eve grabs a gumball and shrugs. I can't stand Eve leaving me. Who is gonna wait an hour for me when I get up late? Who is gonna walk to school with me? Who is gonna play with me? Who is gonna sit on the bench and talk with me until recess is over? Who is gonna share secrets with me? I grab my stuffed doggie and squeeze it. I say, Oh Eve, don't leave!
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by kooky✖kristy on Wed Jul 31, 2013 4:01 pm

More c: 
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Post by Trini♥ on Wed Jul 31, 2013 4:22 pm

great job more!
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Maddie on Wed Jul 31, 2013 5:42 pm

MOOOREE!
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Guest on Wed Jul 31, 2013 6:29 pm

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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Kara on Sat Aug 03, 2013 2:24 pm

I love this Smile Can you post more!?
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Ireland on Sat Aug 03, 2013 5:09 pm

Chapter 6

When I woke up Eve was still asleep. I went and got some cheerios for breakfast and when I got back to my room Eve was sitting up on my bed, sleepy. She says, good morning. I say, good morning. We go outside and play softball, we take turns riding my bike, and we watch tv. We then go to Subway for lunch. After lunch Eve has to go home. We walk to her house, two miles away. When we get to her door, I say Bye Eve! She says, Bye! See you soon! I walked home.
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Rosette on Sun Aug 04, 2013 2:39 am

This is such a great story, please write more.
And just a little suggestion: Can you make them a little longer? Thanks!!
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Ireland on Sun Aug 04, 2013 3:18 pm

This is what Ella looks like    This is what Eve looks like.
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Re: Eve by Ireland

Post by Kara on Sun Aug 04, 2013 4:38 pm

This is awesome! Smile Thanks for the update!
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