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The Unusual Little Creature

Post by Guest on Tue Jul 30, 2013 5:46 am

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Also the font I used it Puppy Bellies.


Chapter 1:
As I sat down in the courtyard at my favorite tree, I heard little crying noises. I looked around to try and find who was crying but I can’t see anyone. I stud up and went to look around, I found nothing and went back to my tree. I then noticed that there was an unusual little creature crying in the corning of the tree branch. I held my hand out and the creature jumped back. The little creature I thought might have been a fairy but it had wings and a horn. Then I realized that is was a unicorn. This unicorn had pink fur, purple wings and a green horn it also has a cutie mark that was a set of lips.

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Post by Maddie on Tue Jul 30, 2013 9:02 am

MOREE!
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Post by Trini♥ on Tue Jul 30, 2013 9:19 am

good job, more c:
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Post by Guest on Tue Jul 30, 2013 5:39 pm

Chapter 2:
I didn’t know this but the unicorn was the last one left of species. All the other Unicorns had been hunted and killed for their horn. This unicorn meant lots to its species. If I let it go the whole species would be gone forever. I loved animals and hated animal cruelty but when it came to a species becoming extinct because of me letting it go. I had to do something but what?


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Post by Maddie on Tue Jul 30, 2013 5:39 pm

MOREE!
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Post by kooky✖kristy on Tue Jul 30, 2013 5:41 pm

omg more plz 
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Post by Guest on Tue Jul 30, 2013 5:43 pm

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I sat there thinking ‘what should I do?’ I held out a little bit of bread from my ham & cheese sandwich. The little creature was very hungry but frightened. The little unicorn leapt forward after thinking for a minute snatching the bread out of my hand and going back to where it was just minutes before.

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Post by Maddie on Tue Jul 30, 2013 5:47 pm

MOREE Amazing story Brit ;33
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Post by Guest on Tue Jul 30, 2013 5:54 pm

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Then the little unicorn noticed I had a quarter of my sandwich left, which I put in my lunchbox after pulling it apart for it to eat a couple of minutes before. The school bell went off with a bang which was quite unusual as it usually went bong bong bong and then stopped and went off again 5 minutes later. I slowly picked up the little unicorn and put it in my hands and covered it so no one else would see the little creature.

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Post by Maddie on Tue Jul 30, 2013 6:15 pm

Moreee c:
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Post by kooky✖kristy on Tue Jul 30, 2013 7:04 pm

MOREE (:
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Post by Guest on Tue Jul 30, 2013 8:08 pm

more

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Post by Guest on Tue Jul 30, 2013 10:45 pm

nice story.. 
please write more..
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Post by Cali on Thu Aug 01, 2013 3:31 pm

Ooh! Pretty please write MORE!!
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Post by Guest on Sat Aug 03, 2013 3:55 am

Is the writing too small?

Chapter 5:
I ran to my locker and put the creature down in there and took out the bread from my lunchbox and put it down so that if the unicorn got hungry it could it eat while I was gone. I grabbed my books from the top shelf of my locker and headed to class.


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Post by Trini♥ on Sat Aug 03, 2013 8:14 am

More!!
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Post by Maddie on Sat Aug 03, 2013 12:52 pm

MOREE!
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Post by Kara on Sat Aug 03, 2013 2:25 pm

More!! Smile You're writing is amazing!
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Post by kooky✖kristy on Sat Aug 03, 2013 2:55 pm

More :DD 
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Post by Rosette on Sun Aug 04, 2013 2:40 am

You are great! I really enjoyed reading this, please write more
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Post by Guest on Sun Aug 04, 2013 6:04 pm

Chapter 6:
I got to the math’s class room in nick of time. The class room was not far from my locker which was helpful. I just hoped the poor little unicorn would be okay. Miss Gelhaar, the math’s teacher greeted me as I walked through the door. I sat down at my normal desk and dumped my heavy books down on to the table.

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Post by Kara on Sun Aug 04, 2013 6:56 pm

I love it! Smile Thanks for the update!
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Post by Maddie on Mon Aug 05, 2013 8:33 am

More!!
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Post by Guest on Mon Aug 05, 2013 6:09 pm

Chapter 7:
As we got 15 minutes into the class. I started to get the nervous thoughts, one was that the little unicorn has bumped its head so hard on the door that it pushed open my locker door. I suddenly heard my name be called and I noticed that the teacher has just asked me a question. I replied “arm, what was the question again?” The teacher than said sternly “The question was, how many edges has a decagonal prism got?”


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Post by Guest on Mon Aug 05, 2013 7:51 pm

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